A descriptive paragraph paints a picture with words. A descriptive paragraph uses spatial order therefore, spatial order transitions must be used.
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Example 1:
In my opinion, the room is very large and
comfortable. It has a big iron bed with a mattress, two pillows, two bolsters that are all white. The bed has a mosquito net with white laces. There are some white flowers in the room near the north wall. A large oval mirror hangs on the south wall. In the room there is also a large wardrobe made of teak wood. A sturdy
cabinet is right next to the door. There is also a table on top of which there are books, stationery, magazines, and a laptop. That is my room. The most comfortable place in my house
is my room. After doing activities outside, I often spend my time in the room.
Example 2:
The room
measures 12m x 7m is really very comfortable occupied. A brown sofa with a
wooden table in the middle of the room. Meanwhile, bookshelves contain several
novels and scholarly books laid tight to the wall south side with a small
potted palm trees that seemed to blend with the walls painted light green.
Outside the room, there is a small pool measuring 2.5 m x 2m contains some koi
fish are milling about. The sound of gurgling water from the pond add to the
cool atmosphere in the living room of Mr. Dani's.
Example 3:
At night, the
view of the house looks so eksostis. Especially with the light that bounces off
all over the house. From the outside the building looks beautiful, able to
provide a warm radiance to anyone who looked at him. Garden lights shining
lights adds an existing eksostis. So warm So Beautiful.
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